that sky looks good. I will do sky/swastika moon but what about putting crosshairs over the swastika to symbolise the main characters mission to destroy?
I see, a searchlight makes sense.
Perhaps a font like Solemnity would work better than the font you are using now?
I can help you out but in July, currently I'm in the middle of my finals but since I do pro bono from time to time - why not.